Water-Strider
Sept 23 2026
The setting sun
reflected off the still water
smooth as mirrored glass
tinting it a golden red.
I looked out through slitted eyes
blinded by the glare.
In the the glassy calm
it almost seemed possible
I could walk on water
as far as I wanted to.
The way water-striders scoot along
and even stand perfectly still,
poised
with their gossamer legs
spread like tiny struts,
each pod
dimpling the polished glass.
An onshore breeze
sent little riffles
skittering over the lake.
A squall touched down
and touched down again,
skipping over the surface
like a smooth flat stone.
It was as if the wind
had become visible.
As if water and air
had conjured together
in a trick of léger de main.
. . . Where, I wondered
were fire and earth?
A high pressure system
barrelled in from the north
under clear blue sky.
A brisk west wind
funnelled down the narrows
adding speed,
driving white capped waves
and lashing spray from their tips.
But this all from memory
in this ill-tempered winter
gazing out at the snow.
Now, the lake is still,
locked beneath the ice
in its seasonal sleep.
The biting wind
is a distant noise
just as well ignored,
while in the cool stagnant depths
the sun
has been forgotten for months.
All the striders have gone.
But now, I can walk on water
as far as I want.
But plod, not scoot,
and too cold to stop.
Of course, it’s fall and way too soon for ice. But today, after 2 days of calm — such perfect glass, it looked firm enough to walk on — an onshore breeze from Lake Superior, which is a giant wind machine not far to the south, sent little riffles over our small lake. So I started to think about the various winds we get, and how they initeract with the surface.
As I wrote, the possibility of walking on water stuck with me. So of course, a sharp turn to winter’s ice-covered lake was the obvious ending. And a good way out. Otherwise, the poem would have simply stopped instead of finishing!

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