Pulp
Sept 28 2026
I have distilled my words
down to pure alcohol.
They will intoxicate
merely by proximity;
a whiff, with your eyes closed,
a kiss
with booze on her breath.
And unlike wine
these spirits
aren’t corrupted by age.
No mixers or garnishes.
No spritzers, or umbrella drinks.
Just a shot glass
of hard liquor
tossed back in one gulp.
Concision, she says,
wielding her red pen
like a scalpel dripping blood.
Embellishment’s for sissies,
while 200 proof
is proof of manliness
— absinthe
or whisky straight
my editor insists.
And teetotallers?
Ahhh, the abstainers
who claim to be virtuous
and high on life.
Who want to burn the confessions
and self-indulgent memoirs,
long Russian novels
with polysyllabic names.
Torch the sappy romances
with run-on sentences,
sex
too embarrassing to read.
But happily, recite razored poetry
they know by heart
or make up their own.
Then marvel at the trees
instead of turning them to pulp.
I began to write this as an antidote to my usual prolixity. An act of self-discipline. Because I’m my own editor, and apparently not a very good one!
I was determined: 10 lines max. A quickie. Unsurprisingly, I failed. … On the other hand, I think if every word counts, it passes the test.
But it came fast. Wrote itself. And — I think — propulsive enough to seem short! Anyway, while distillation is good, who wants 200 proof alcohol? It burns going down, and tastes like disinfectant.
It’s about concision, yes; cutting the fat. But also — as the last two lines (as well as earlier in high on life) so abruptly clarify — about eliminating the intermediary and interpreter; and instead, living life first hand. Because language is at best a poor metaphor for the real thing.
I always instinctively distrusted poetry that came too easily. But later learned that those are often the best. This one was pure stream of consciousness. A flow state. I began with no idea where it would go: just took dictation, while letting it take me by the hand. ( . . . Actually, most of my poems feel like that!)

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