Municipal Pool
Aug 7 2026
In the municipal pool
almost all is bared.
Even the one-piece with the ruffled skirt
the old lady wears
shows more of her than anyone’s seen
since her husband left
for someone younger.
Yet almost no one cares;
there’s no self-consciousness
when everyone’s flaws
are on public display.
Of course, the adolescent boys still strut and flex
pull in their stomachs
and act like they don’t care,
despite how unsure
they really feel.
The teenaged girls
in skimpy bikinis they’re too young to wear
have no idea
this is the best they’ll ever look.
They cluster together
like gazelle on the Serengeti
as if numbers will protect them,
giggling girlishly
and flirting with the boys.
There are middle aged men
who seem perfectly content
with sagging bellies and body hair
sprouting sporadically
from pallid skin;
old geezers
with twiggy arms and veiny legs
sporting Speedos
that have seen better days;
and the aquarobics ladies
who try hard to stay fit,
but would much prefer lunch with the girls
and a second glass of wine.
And kids of all ages
who are mercifully oblivious
as to how they appear,
cannonballing giddily
and running on the deck
despite the lifeguards’ loud slow downs.
The municipal pool
is the great equalizer.
We’re all average
or think we are,
all judging ourselves
but not very hard,
and all too preoccupied
with having fun
to care that we aren’t body builders
or movie stars.
I slip into the pool
to a shock of cool
and too much chlorine,
goggles fogging over
and baggy suit
billowing up around my legs.
Start counting lengths
up and down the lane.
All by myself
in the welcome quiet
of this water world,
where every difference
looks pretty much the same.
Here’s a note that accompanied the first draft when I shared it with a friend, who also happens to be a much better swimmer than me.
I was in the pool yesterday (Thursday) — fantastic weather for a lake swim, but lousy timing for a pre-booked appointment, and I had no choice but to be in town.
The same damn thing is happening: in the lake, my stroke feels powerful, fluid, and painless, as well as tireless; but then I get in a lane with the finger-breaking buoy lines and head-bashing bulkheads, and I must tense up or somehow alter my stroke so I feel slow and my shoulder immediately starts to hurt. You ever hear of anything like this in anyone else?!!
Anyway, it was busy there, with more than the usual assortment of ages and body types. (Including this “old geezer”!) So at least I got this poem out of it! . . . No title as yet. Suggestions welcome.

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