Sunday, July 16, 2017


Comet
July 15 2017













A comet
does not streak across the sky
as one might well have imagined,
a frozen ball of ice and rock
sling-shot 'round the sun.

No, you'd see it hovering,
against the backdrop of stars
a ghostly presence at dawn.
Advancing slowly, day by day
for those who keep careful watch,
the faint glow
of a vaporized tail
speeding in its wake.
While meteors streak, satellites plod
space dust sparks and dies,
striking earth's
thin rim of air
and instantly blinking-out.
So, does anything really exist
if its death goes unlamented
it lived its life unwitnessed?

Comets dwell
in the freezing dark
in the sun's distant reaches,
and only appear every few hundred years
a generation apart.
So they are seen by virgin eyes,
history long forgotten
or not bothered to learn at all.

And expire
when they pass too close to the sun,
boiling-off into stardust
atomized to naught.

Or slip beyond
the sun's anemic pull;
orphaned
as cold black cinders
in interstellar space.

Like all portents, omens, signs of the gods
we make of this what we will,
looking up, night after night
at a comet ominously hovering.

Great events transpire
cities rise and fall,
saviours are born
tyrants die
simple folk muddle.
The affairs of men
in all their odd elliptical orbits,
whip-sawed from hellish to lost.




Comets were historically seen as portents, omens, signs. They might accompany the birth of a king, or presage some horrible downfall.

In the poem, I use this presumed confluence of celestial happenings and human events to extend the metaphor: the affairs of men mirroring the comet's erratic orbit, its ignominious deaths. Not to mention our ignorance of history, and how we are fated to repeat it. The writer, clearly, is neither saviour nor tyrant; just a simple muddler, like everyone else.


Or perhaps the writer is closer to space dust, his life blinking out unwitnessed, his existence in doubt. Because we are not solitary solipsists. We only exist in the eyes of others. 

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