Not the Stuff of Poetry
July 23 2026
I did nothing today.
Some reading, puttering, a desultory walk.
A sandwich was made
the dogs fed.
But no clock was watched
phone scrolled.
The day passed
more quickly than you’d think;
another one
crossed off the calendar
and forgotten just-like-that.
Wasted, one might sniffly dismiss,
since we’ve all been told
that whatever isn’t quantified
doesn’t count.
This is not the stuff of poetry.
No angst
longing
wonder,
no beauty in the small things
or awe at the divine.
No unrequited love
rejection to nurse
or lover to admire,
nothing to confess
and nothing to aspire to.
No artistry
when what one writes
simply says what it says.
Yet there are times
when you need a day like that,
unscheduled, open-ended
spent all by yourself.
When I didn’t overthink
or explore how I feel,
did not introspect
retrospect
or worry what comes next.
Didn't stop to notice.
Which is what poets
can’t help but do
— noticing.
Smelling the roses, yes,
but also taking in the leaves
and their perfect beads of dew,
lustrous little spheres
like mini-magnifiers.
So we are not so much wordsmiths
as exposed nerves
quivering with all our senses,
receptive to the world
both inside and out.
But instead, I just let go.
I was a leaf,
circling slowly down
to a stop so soft
I didn’t even know.
Content to ride the wind
wherever it goes,
end up
wherever I’m dropped.
A lush green leaf
lying untouched
in the dull brown duff of the forest floor.
A fallow day, but hardly wasted.
Yet I feel days like this need to be justified. So for those keeping count, does getting a poem out of it at least go some way toward redeeming my indolence?
An attentive reader will be amused to see how the poem contradicts itself. Because there’s all kinds of noticing going on. Even when there’s nothing to notice, it not only takes self-referential note, but comes up with a metaphor to embellish it. In my defence, the poem was written after the fact. The day really was pleasantly brain dead! Or at least inasmuch as I can ever stop myself from introspecting, retrospecting, and ruminating.

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