Sunday, July 12, 2020


Sick Room
July 10 2020


The sick room smells of stale air
and bitter pills
and a fruit basket spoiling,
the strong bleach
of hospital sheets
that may have gotten soiled.

Of foul breath
with the fetid scent
of a bad liver failing.
Of corrupted lungs
a coated tongue
and a body slowly wasting.
And still
the unmistakable funk
of old man smell
that persists no matter what.

Instead of big windows and fresh air
there are overhead fluorescents
one small anemic vent.

Where it's consistently over-heated
and disagreeably dry.
Although not so much for the dying,
who are always so chilled to the bone
they feel they'll never get warm.

So when the cool bloodless body
is wheeled discreetly out
then quickly whisked away
will the stench of death remain?
Despite the freshly made bed
and sharp chemical scent
of hospital disinfectant?

For us, it will forever be there.
Because we can't forget the death bed
and the room we spent so much time.
The final strained breath
and the last words of the dying,
then that brief moment of silence
suspended in the air.

As if that momentary pause
was composed of its own small molecules,
a long relieved breath
we could all deeply inhale.



My dog is very sick, and this elicits thoughts of death. Which was the last subject I set out to tackle. I just felt the need to write – something, anything – to get some momentary distance from my distress.

As I often do, I look for inspiration in others' poems, and so turned to the Poetry Foundation website. Under “Collections”, the highlighted item was – most coincidentally -- “Poetry of Sickness, Illness, and Recovery.” There was a Billy Collins poem among the selections: Sick Room. Which struck me, under the circumstances, as an idea as good as any – despite my reservations – I might riff on. This poem is the result. 

I think the final two lines are particularly telling. Because while this natural response might elicit feelings of guilt, it's perfectly understandable: we are bereaved when someone close to us dies, but also relieved that they have been released from their suffering. And especially with something like dementia, when the person we know them to be effectively died well before their actual death. 

Here's a link to the Billy Collins piece:

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