Thursday, December 3, 2015

Stagnant Front
Dec 1 2015


Snow softens,
sodden glops
heavily drop
through settled air.

Turning to hard rain.
The tipping point
between liquid and solid
that could go either way;
a tight-rope walker, teetering
halfway there.

Now a fine mist
that cuts to the quick
with cold.

Then sleet
with its shimmering sound
chilly edge.

Precipitation mixed
the weatherman said,
a stagnant front
of snow and ice
and frozen mud.

As if we were caught
in a war of attrition
between winter and fall;
hunkered down, freezing wet
in some miserable trench
in no-man’s land.

If only fall would withdraw
winter declare itself.
Like a high pressure system
that comes barrelling-in
on a brisk west wind,
winning the battle
of cold.



I've written far too many "weather poems", so wasn't thrilled to find myself writing another. And I've not only already used this martial metaphor for weather, but also the First World War imagery. But sometimes, a poem insists on being written a certain way, and I'm left simply taking dictation.

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