Freshly Cut Grass
May 29 2022
The smell of fresh-cut grass.
Hay, drying in a field
with its mix of earthy and sweet.
And with your nose almost touching
sniffing a baby's head;
your own child, especially.
Just-baked bread
cooling on the rack.
A rare steak
searing on the grill.
A cup of steaming coffee
in a classic diner mug,
the one with the white enamel finish
and thick smooth rim.
A forest at dawn,
redolent
of spruce and pine
pungent balsam.
Loamy soil, just after it's thawed.
The first drops of rain
on a hot summer day
on sun-baked pavement.
Your lover
after a long time away
the moment you step inside.
We are visual creatures.
We neglect our sense of smell,
which is dull, to begin with.
But now, cutting the grass
I breath deeply in
and pause;
instantly back
to the long forgotten child
behind the manual mower
on that postage stamp lawn
my father took such pride in.
Somewhere
in some deep recess of the brain
where the past continues to live.
Even though we're primarily visual creatures, smell can be powerful. Especially the tight link between smell and both memory and emotion. It leaves me wondering how the world seems to my dogs, who — unlike us — have such acute noses and swim in a rich olfactory sea.
Because poetry should be more visceral than intellectual, more immersed than detached, and more sensational than analytical, I very intentionally try to include sound and smell, as well as touch, into mine. Here, smell is everything!
The smell of the first drops of rain/on hot black pavement is called “petrichor”. I would have used that as the title — I think it's an intriguing word that would draw a curious reader in — but I've already used it, and rarely let myself repeat a title.
I have a set of those diner mugs, and love them. Coffee tastes and smells better in such heavy vessels that feel so substantial in your hand, and with your lips on that thick smooth rim.
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