Simple Food
Oct 24 2021
Soup simmers.
A delightful smell
wafts from the pot,
the room redolent
of leftover veggies
rich meaty broth.
With plenty of pepper, a dash of salt.
And as it heats, it thickens.
So on a cold fall day
the windows are misted,
savoury soup
wetting the air.
Crackers crunch, bowls thump
sundry spoons clunk down,
motley utensils
miscellaneous mugs.
If the soup's too hot, no need to rush;
blow over
sip slowly
let it slip down your throat.
Feel the warmth
filling you up,
the umami rush
roasted russets
celery crunch,
quelling your hunger
but still not enough.
In a generous tumbler
cold milk from the fridge.
In the warm kitchen, the glass sweats
so don't let it slip.
Then an open-face sandwich
on crusty French bread.
Some well-aged cheddar
a tomato wedge,
green leaf lettuce
and hot mustard spread.
Then rare roast beef,
sliced paper thin, but laid on thick.
As the weather changes
days get shorter
and snow impends,
we fatten for winter
on simple food
on a brisk autumn day.
A very enjoyable poem to write: all about sensuous pleasure, not to mention a fun exercise in word play and concision.
I tend to over-intellectualize – which works a lot less well in poetry than it does in prose – and so make a conscious effort to invoke the senses. Here, that's all there is: taste, touch, smell, and sight. Even sound: the crunch of the celery, the clunk of the bowls. A more visceral and tangible appeal. Simple language for a simple meal.
And some poetic licence, as well. Because I never add salt to anything. Never use mustard. And frankly, can't remember that last time I made – or even ate – soup!
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