Summer Rain
Aug 20 2021
A rainy day,
and I look out
through trickles of water
dribbling down the pane.
I watch
as they descend in jagged lines
no two alike.
Most disappear over the edge,
some merge, and coalesce.
While the rest run dry
their journey done.
Outside
there is nothing to see but dark.
The windows have all steamed up,
and a ghostly reflection of me
hovers in the glass.
I open one a crack,
letting in
the sweetness of evening air,
the mineral smell
of rain on parched soil.
A gust of wind
and a tree brushes the house,
wet leaves
slapping against the wall.
And on the roof
the steady patter of rain,
like slow jazz
or soft background music.
I fix on the soothing sound
and feel myself slipping away.
How easy sleep comes
with a gentle summer rain,
cooling the muggy day
soothing frazzled senses.
Pure imagination! Perhaps wishful thinking. Because it has been hot and dry and we're desperate for rain.
There is a thunderstorm in the forecast for later tonight. So not the gentle summer rain imagined in this poem. But any kind of rain would be welcome now.
I like poems that invoke all the senses. Here, sight, smell, temperature, and sound. And I suppose touch, with the tree against the house. Hard to squeeze taste into it!
A poem like this has no presumption. It's not intellectual, philosophical, or political. It doesn't challenge the reader with deep metaphors, ambiguity, clever allusion, or multiple levels of meaning. It's a simple mood poem, meant to evoke the slightly soporific mood of a gentle rain on a summer evening. Descriptive, but with a personal element that I hope gives it heart.
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