Tuesday, January 29, 2008

Under Ice
Jan 28 2008


We walk on water
in heavy winters
— a hard black slab,
so thick it feels like the last ice age
crossing over.

This is rare,
the deep-freeze winter
the north wind scouring the surface clear.
As if this little lake was the kernel of a thousand year glacier,
about to freeze solid
— ice
all the way down.

Underneath
the lake is dark, motionless,
silver fish hovering, holding-on ‘til spring.
Like a lost planet,
so far out in its orbit
the sun is a thimble of pale light.
Where mysterious life forms shelter beneath the surface
moving slowly;
the way molecules approaching absolute zero
come to a stop.

It’s the snow that makes it treacherous
— a warm blanket over thin ice, despite the cold,
creaking and groaning as you cross over.
Looking back, you watch your boot-prints fill with slush
the water rising-up
its winter sleep interrupted;
as grumpy as dark January mornings
when the alarm jangles you up,
2 hours before the sun.

1 comment:

briangreen said...

This last poem is really growing on me. There's something in the 3rd stanza that just caught my attention: the telescoping of the order of magnitude, from a planet to a drop of water under a microscope. What appeals to me is this self-referential idea, this idea that we're unable to see ourselves in perspective, to see out of the closed box of our own frame of reference or order of magnitude. What I mean is, if you were swimming around in a sealed little world of liquid water on some Godforsaken outer planet -- some tiny improbable precious little sanctuary of life -- this would be the entire universe to you. And absolute zero is the end of time, the running down of all the energy in the cosmos: here, telescoping time; from my mundane little frozen lake to the ultimate freezing-over of everything. ...Just a thought! ( ...Actually, my favorite part of the poem is "ice ...all the way down"!)
Brian