Late Snow
Nov 7 2014
A tulip
in early bloom
in freshly fallen snow,
translucent white, from melt.
A tulip
in early bloom
in freshly fallen snow,
translucent white, from melt.
Looks luscious, in April light,
defiant, erect
in vivid green, and fuchsia red.
Makes you feel like the sightless man
with a vague recollection of grey,
struck by colour
too dazzling to comprehend.
It might survive
a light frost.
Or have come too soon, and die,
lying flat, in damp brown grass
colour drained.
Like all the visionaries, who were scorned in their day,
unremembered, unlamented
in the riot of spring's excess.
A nice bookend to my previous poem, First Snow. Although it didn't come about that way.
defiant, erect
in vivid green, and fuchsia red.
Makes you feel like the sightless man
with a vague recollection of grey,
struck by colour
too dazzling to comprehend.
It might survive
a light frost.
Or have come too soon, and die,
lying flat, in damp brown grass
colour drained.
Like all the visionaries, who were scorned in their day,
unremembered, unlamented
in the riot of spring's excess.
A nice bookend to my previous poem, First Snow. Although it didn't come about that way.
The vision of intense arresting colour actually came from a
quick cut in the opening sequence of HBOs latest mini-series Olive
Kitteridge. This complicated woman is repelling, fascinating, and yet
deeply sympathetic; and the show is a wonderful depiction of nuanced
relationship, repression, and subterranean suffering in an unremarkable
working-class town in coastal Maine .
But that's not what this poem is about. It's simply about this image, which
jumped out of the screen and seared itself into my retina, calling out for a
short sharp homage. (Although I think the garden is important in the show, and
not simply incidental: something she can care for; a way to show her love undemonstrably,
and without the risk of betrayal or disappointment.)
This early tulip was too eager for life, too irrepressible: like the lost visionaries and go-getters and innovators, unceremoniously cut down by a late snow, unremembered and unlamented.
Oliver Sachs wrote about a man who suddenly recovered his
sight. He found the newly seen world incomprehensible and overwhelming. I've
always remembered this: the gift of sight, but his brain and his spirit had no
capacity for it, and vision ended up a terrible burden.
It's also a way to simply say "stop and smell the
roses" without resorting to cliché. It reflects my preference for
microcosm, close observation, the still life. Which is what poetry is all
about: not just looking at the world, but stopping, taking time, seeing it as
if newly made.
I always feel I want to write less; that the apotheosis of
my work will be a poem of a single word. That was something I set out to do
here: write something sharp and short. Not nearly there, of course; but at
least closer!
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